lots to enjoy here - and the synching between the music and the on-screen activity is spot-on (the 'sprinkle' of the stars and the music accompanying it, for example). I just think maybe that 'Then it's a...' as opposed to 'Then it is a' is slightly smoother on the eye and in the brain when you hear yourself read it (if that makes any sense at all!).
Yep yep it totally makes sense thank you! I was actually waiting for someone to help me out with the phrasing :) Feel free to stop by again if you see anything else that can be smoothened or corrected!
lots to enjoy here - and the synching between the music and the on-screen activity is spot-on (the 'sprinkle' of the stars and the music accompanying it, for example). I just think maybe that 'Then it's a...' as opposed to 'Then it is a' is slightly smoother on the eye and in the brain when you hear yourself read it (if that makes any sense at all!).
ReplyDeleteYep yep it totally makes sense thank you! I was actually waiting for someone to help me out with the phrasing :) Feel free to stop by again if you see anything else that can be smoothened or corrected!
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